Fie Eoin Fridays: Aleda’s Story #11

Happy Feast of Eoin, Aledans! If you saw yesterday’s post you know all about today’s celebrations (Happy Birthday Juliana!), and you also know that today is the final installment of Aleda’s Story! And with all that happy excitement in mind let me just say…

I’m sorry. I’m so, so sorry for what I’m about to do to you. You don’t become a goddess by sitting at home and being quiet.

You can catch up on the story here.

Wisteria-covered Spear, the symbol of Kindra and Kaye. (Wisteria is Aleda's sacred flower)
Wisteria-covered Spear, the symbol of Kindra and Kaye. (Wisteria is Aleda’s sacred flower)

Carrick lifted his head and coughed at the dust and ash thick in the air. The children were crying in the distance, from fear or injury he didn’t know.

“Lea, are you okay?”

He looked at her face, still and gray with ash. “Lea?” He put a hand to her cheek. Warm. “Aleda?” He bent over, ear on her chest, but it didn’t rise. There was no sound.

“No, Lea. Please. Don’t leave me yet. I can’t do this without you.”

He wiped her face clean and sat back before he saw the blood, still seeping from the wound in her back. He tried to lift her, to cradle her and rock her, but her hand was stuck under a boulder. Claimed by Mountain.

“Give her back!” Carrick screamed. “Give her back to me, please.” He broke down, collapsing on top of her and crying until he heard Lisel calling for them and the cries of the children getting closer.

They couldn’t see her like this. They…there was nothing he could do. He couldn’t move her, couldn’t hide her, couldn’t even clean the blood away. The children would see the wrath of Mountain.

Alaric arrived first. He froze when he saw his mother. Lisel arrived behind him, Faye still unconscious in her arms. “Oh no,” she breathed.

“She’s…I can’t…” Carrick swallowed as Lisel put Faye on the ground and knelt next to him. Her eyes swept the scene and Carrick finally found his voice. “Her hand is trapped.”

“What do we do?”

He didn’t know. Aleda would have known what to do. She always knew what to do. He bit his lip until it began to bleed and the pain brought him around. “We’ll build a pyre.”

Lisel nodded. “That seems appropriate.” They looked in the direction of Mountain, but the ash in the sky hid Him from view.

“Momma?” Alaric had crept forward and was standing behind Carrick. “Is she okay?”

Carrick pulled him into his lap and hugged his son hard. He didn’t know how to answer that. Alaric pulled away. “Is the man dead too?”

Carrick followed his son’s gaze and saw Coyle, face-down on the ground, the back of his head caved in. “Yes, the man is dead too.”

“Did he kill Momma?”

He looked at the blood soaking the ash-covered ground. “Yes.”

“Because we stole his babe?”

Carrick shook his head. “No, Ali. He was an angry man. He wanted to kill Mountain and your mother was the closest he could come.”

Alaric looked into his eyes and spoke very quietly. “Is Momma a God too? Like Mountain?”

Aleda had always seemed a goddess to Carrick. In those final moments she seemed to command Mountain, rather than Him commanding her. He had claimed her for Himself, and they would give her a funeral pyre, to send her ashes into the sky to join His.

“Yes, Ali,” Carrick whispered into his hair and held him close. “Your mother was a goddess. She was the Mother Goddess, Aleda.”

He held his son as Lisel checked on her daughter and the other children. Faye was alive, but hadn’t woken yet, and Elise busied the other children with collecting wood. Carrick and Alaric placed the wood over Aleda’s body, covering her until she could no longer be seen, and at nightfall Carrick lit the fire.

It was the longest night of his life, standing by the fire, one hand on his son’s shoulder and the other gripped tightly in Lisel’s, watching his wife turn to ash and join Mountain in the sky. Carrick’s throat tightened as he thought of his life with her.

Playing as children in the water. The first time she looked at him with a different light in her eyes, then ran giggling back to her friends. When he finally got up the nerve to kiss her, and how soft she had been. Their wedding ceremony. The joy on her face when she told him she was pregnant with Alaric. The fear when Mountain first exploded and the pregnant women began to die while giving birth to the Changelings. Listening to her screams from outside the hut and knowing he would lose her. His joy when he heard the babe cry and her voice asking for him after she miraculously survived. The steadiness when she first stood up to Coyle and the others who wanted to kill the children. The terror when they finally ran. And her constant presence through the past seven summers on the mountainside, finding their way together. Raising children that no one else wanted, but she was willing to die for.

A loud crack echoed through the mountainside as the wood of the pyre fell in on itself, sending up a furl of sparks that lit the sky. Tears fell from Carrick’s eyes at the knowledge that her body was gone, even if her spirit stayed with him always. His Mother Goddess.


I wrote that scene listening to Elizabeth and the Catapult, Do Not Hang Your Head.


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Rebecca Enzor

Rebecca Enzor is a chemist in Charleston, SC who writes Young Adult and New Adult Fantasy and Magical Realism. Repped by Eric Smith of P.S. Literary. Her debut novel, SPEAK THE OCEAN, comes out with Reuts Pub in Fall 2018!

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